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|  | tangledpaw [of] windclan « Thread Started on Aug 23, 2007, 5:10am » | |
Name: Tangledpaw Gender: She-cat Age: Sevens moons Rank: Apprentice Clan: WindClan Appearance: Tangledpaw's eyes are what you'd expect from most ragdolls, blue, but they are nonetheless pretty. Being so young and not having experienced many terrible things, her eyes hold a certain innocent and sweet look. Yes, yes, surely quite a few cats have this look in their eyes but it is still somewhat comforting to look at them (her eye's), especially if you're her parents.
She is of a pretty average size, if not a tad smaller than the other apprentices. Although it would appear that she is a bit plump, she really just has a thick, warm coat of soft mainly white fur with a bit of grey. Underneath her layers of fur is a relatively skinny little she-cat that hopes that she won't stay tiny forever. Her pelt often appears ungroomed and tangled despite her attempts to keep it looking pretty but that aside she still manages to look very cute, like most young cats do. Unlike her mother's and father's tails, Tangledpaw's is rather short limp but she wouldn't have it any other way... If it were longer it'd just give her even more fur to groom.
Overall Tangledpaw is a healthy, adorable and dainty looking cat if not, as stated before, a tad small. Quick Desc.: Small grey and white ragdoll she-cat with soft blue eyes. Personality: Truth is, most of the time Tangledpaw is a sweetheart and hardly ever gets into petty or not-so-petty squabbles with her fellow clan mates. Of course things some may hit her the wrong way but she'll likely get over it and only hold a little bit of hostility to the thing/cat, if no hostility at all. Only when really frustrated will you see her become red with anger (figuratively, of course).
Though she is sweet and cute, Tangledpaw can doubtlessly be a tad arrogant at times but there's nothing wrong with a little competition. She isn't extremely competitive but she likes to prove herself to people unless of course it's proving that she can walk in mud without a care because well, she hates mud and it doesn't help that she's clumsy, either.
Some don't believe it but she can be incredibly serious in the right situations. Most cats would suspect that a seven moon old apprentice just out of the nursery a moon ago couldn't process such depth but well, she can but obviously being so young she can't be serious all the time and most of the time isn't.
In conclusion, Tangledpaw is very amicable, deep at times a long with moody and overall a normal cat. History: Like most cats... No, all cats and basically every living thing Tangledpaw was born and unusually she was the only one of her litter but she was certainly a bit of a troublesome and cheeky little kit so one was more than enough for her mother. When she was born, Tangledpaw, then nameless, the little fur she had was tangled, as was she, or so it appeared. Her she had one arm under her leg and a leg under her arm but that wasn't a problem for long as she crawled over to her mother's stomach to drink milk. But her mother and most of the other cats there at the time knew what they were going to call her, Tangledkit (now Tangledpaw).
Her life wasn't all that tragic, although she had almost been picked up by a bird of some sort but of course her daddykins had picked her up just at the right time. It was awfully frightening for her mother but the bird didn't as if it could of carried the small kit anyway. Tangledpaw was too young to really remember anything so she hasn't developed some extreme phobia of birds... But that doesn't mean she enjoys their presence.
As soon as she was six moons old she was made an apprentice and not really much happened after that except being congratulated and told by her mother how proud her father and herself were even though she was going to become an apprentice anyway. IC: Damp and dank were probably the best words to describe the place, a long with incredibly muddy and somewhat disgusting to the young cat, obviously not enjoying her third training lesson. She hadn't a clue where she was, she'd hardly even listened to her mentor at all and had spent more time worrying about her fluffy coat, even though it was mess before she stepped foot out of WindClan camp. Almost gracefully walking beside her, Tangledpaw's mentor explained to her how to silently trudge through mud. Is it not apparent that I don't care for coming into contact with mud whatsoever? She thought as she continued through the thick, brown, revolting grime.
At last the pair stepped onto some firm, not-so-disgusting dirt. Relieved, Tangledpaw sighed, smiled and asked her mentor if they were ever going to do that again and if so that she'd refuse too. The older cat told StarClan to bless her and then let out a chuckle as they continued walking.
Eventually they reached their destination, Wind Hill. 'Listen closely', 'Don't step too heavily!', 'You're scaring all the prey away!', 'Stop whining, it's just mud, Tangledpaw! Sheesh!', 'We can wash it off later, now shut up!'. Such sweet words of comfort she got from her mentor, haha. Just mud? It was bothering the heck out of her! How on earth was she supposed to concentrate with dry mud, clay, up to around the top of her legs? She was much, much, much more happier as a kit, that was for sure.
Finally quieting down, Tangledpaw dropped into a low crouch along side her mentor. She opened her mouth to taste the scent of the air and even though it was visible and easy to detect, she was rather proud of herself when she scented a mouse. It was small, she could see that, but it was food. Her mentor gave her a nod and Tangledpaw prepared herself. She crept forward, trod on a twig and the mouse ran but she was determined and Tangledpaw chased after it. After a minute or soon she returned with the plump but tiny mouth in her jaws. Other: ... I love these smilies.  Password: Traitors (unless I missed something D:... and that'd be a bother).
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|  | Re: tangledpaw [of] windclan « Reply #1 on Aug 23, 2007, 7:05am » | |
Good job. ^^ I especially love her name. :3
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