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Marshpaw [of] RiverClan MODIFIED!!!
« Thread Started on Jul 18, 2007, 11:06am »

Name:Marshpaw
Gender:tom
Age:8 moons
Rank: Apprentice
Clan:RiverClan
Description: Marshpaw is a very lithe and agile cat. He has a small, compact body. His ears and paws are small and neat. His emerald eyes are set a little closer than normal on his angular face. He has a golden colored pelt with black markings all over it. He has a white stripe in between his eyes down to his nose.
Quick Desc.: A gold colored tom.
Picture:None^^ He's pretty unique.
Personality: Marshpaw is pretty independant. He likes to do things by himself, but he won't object to having to work with a partner. He is very calm, and doesn't like a lot of noise or distractions. He's a very quiet cat who keeps his opinions to himself, unless he's asked. He doesn't get angry too often, either.
History: Marshapw was born to a litter of four, but 2 of his brothers died an hour after birth.His mother, Freezingrain, was heart broken and refused to take care of anymore kits.The same day he was born, his mother went to the elders den. A friend nursed him and his sister, Cherrypaw. Until they were old enough to be apprentices. They still don't know about their mother, but they do know that Hollystream isn't their birth mom.
IC: As Marshpaw became closer and closer to the riverbank, his excitement rose. His first solo hunting mission! He stopped his tail from twitching with his excitement before looking up at the sky. 'The sun is pretty low; I should be fine sitting over there,' he thought. He wanted to show his mentor that he did listen, and that he could do it it. He made sure his shadow didn't lay on the water before sitting down. He raised paw just above the water, waiting for a fish to come.
Other: None.
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Re: Marshpaw [of] RiverClan
« Reply #1 on Jul 26, 2007, 12:53pm »

OOT: I love Furuba, especially Kyo(u). x3 -noticed your avvie and picture in your sig-

BackInTopic: Looks fine, but all that I ask is that you go a few more sentences into Marshpaw's history. Maybe include his parents, their loyalty (or disloyalty) to the Clan, or maybe something that happened in his first two moons of apprenticeship (since he's 8 moons). Just some ideas. ^^

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